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Opposites Attract

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I love it when she wears her hair down,
She prefers it up.
I think she sings beautifully,
She thinks she's 'ok'
I tell her she's perfect,
She doesn't believe me.
I tell her she's beautiful,
She thinks I'm lying.
I love her laugh,
But she hates it.
She thinks I'm pretty,
I don't.
She thinks I'll leave her,
I wont.
I poem I wrote about me and my girlfriend, god I love her.

ETA: I edited this to add the last to lines, very time I ran this poem through my head those two started popping up, I hope you still like it. :)
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Tzadikim's avatar
It's true. People are like magnets, they stick together.
The last two lines are very sweet, it made me go 'awww!'

And I feel very thick-headed that it took me almost an entire month to realize that you two are dating.